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Imprisoned within the walls of your mind,
every direction the same.
Screaming will not save you,
no one will care.
These insane thoughts break you down,
but nothing can break the walls.
I don't like this. I don't like the way it sounds, the way I wrote it, anything. But I posted it anyway. Don't ask me why :P
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:iconfengsune:
Fengsune Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2011
What color were the walls? Mine varied and were often gray.
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SnickersRepublic Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I don't know.. Something dark.
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:iconfengsune:
Fengsune Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2011
The belly of the whale, perhaps?
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SnickersRepublic Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Precisely :)
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:iconfengsune:
Fengsune Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2011
^-^
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:iconmiladyofmoonlight:
MiladyOfMoonlight Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Well, I DO like the way you wrote it, because what you wrote is very true and something I can very much relate to right now.
Well done!
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SnickersRepublic Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! :)
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:iconmiladyofmoonlight:
MiladyOfMoonlight Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome!
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