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These chains they made,
to hold you down.
Surely you will break them.
And when you have,
the world is yours.
The ultimate place of freedom.
This was inspired by something a friend said to me a few months ago. "Hang them with the chains they enslave you with."
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Lonely-Insomniac Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
gladly, I broke outta my chains a while back.
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SnickersRepublic Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
if only...
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Lonely-Insomniac Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
you can do it :)
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SnickersRepublic Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
haha not even =p
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Lonely-Insomniac Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
think positively! :P
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SnickersRepublic Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
okay! (:
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red1699 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2011
wow I like it and so true it is
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SnickersRepublic Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Indeed!
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red1699 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2011
yup indeed
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nero1209 Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
hmm still making me think..... ...... ......
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SnickersRepublic Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
?
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nero1209 Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
has so many Possibilities to take this i like it a lot what did you mean by it if dont mind me asking
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SnickersRepublic Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Um.. well something along the lines of, people suck. jk. But seriously, like people who try to bring you down, fuck them. Basically.
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nero1209 Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
cool, and those are my thoughts aswell
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SnickersRepublic Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Good, they should be haha. Just kidding. People can think what they want. That's what they're going to do anyway.
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wispered Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
love it too =)
i´m delighted with your poems =)
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SnickersRepublic Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thankyouu (:
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bloodsucker16 Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Very good advice. I'd take it <>-
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SnickersRepublic Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah, he's pretty good at that (:
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bloodsucker16 Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
friends usually are <>-
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SnickersRepublic Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Insdeed!
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bloodsucker16 Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
yes. i know my best friend always gives me the best advice <>-
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SnickersRepublic Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
(:
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choasjferal Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2011
great poem
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SnickersRepublic Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks (:
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choasjferal Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2011
no problem
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Hermi26 Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2011
I love this! I love every word! 0.o
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SnickersRepublic Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks (: It means alot :D
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Hermi26 Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2011
your very welcome :)
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